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Hello, teacher. Today, I will tell you about my English conversation class. As I told you before, the teacher is a Malaysian. There are 4 classmates including me. This class is for intermediate level. We have various nationalities there. There are one Japanese mom, one Yemeni lady, and two Korean moms. Except one Yemeni lady, three of us studied together last Agust so, we have known each other. The Yemeni lady was the first Yemeni person I've met until now. She introduced herself as a journalist who had worked at Yemen Times. She has a very special story to stay in Malaysia. She originally came here to travel to Malaysia. While staying here, several nations attacked Yemen. That is to say, Yemen is in a state of war. Due to this war, the Yemen airport has been closed, so her family hasn't come back to Yemen nearly for 3 months until now. I'm so sorry to hear her story. However, she told us that she keeps writing articles to spread Yemen's situations all over the world as a journalist.

Hi there, Kaylee! I checked your composition below. Please review and take note of my corrections. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~   Hello, teacher.>> CORRECT!Today, I will tell you about my English conversation class. >> CORRECT!As I told you before, the teacher is a Malaysian. >> CORRECT!There are 4 classmates including me. >> There are four students in that class, including me.This class is for intermediate level. >> This class is for intermediate level students.We have various nationalities there. >> CORRECT!There are one Japanese mom, one Yemeni lady, and two Korean moms. >> There is one Japanese mom, one Yemeni lady, and two Korean moms.Except one Yemeni lady, three of us studied together last Agust so, we have known each other. >> Except for the Yemeni lady, the three of us studied together last August so we already know each other.The Yemeni lady was the first Yemeni person I\'ve met until now. >> The Yemeni lady was the first Yemeni that I\'ve met.She introduced herself as a journalist who had worked at Yemen Times. >> CORRECT!She has a very special story to stay in Malaysia. >> There is a story behind her stay in Malaysia.She originally came here to travel to Malaysia. >> She originally came to Malaysia to travel.While staying here, several nations attacked Yemen. >> While she was here, several nations attacked Yemen.That is to say, Yemen is in a state of war. >> CORRECT!Due to this war, the Yemen airport has been closed, so her family hasn\'t come back to Yemen nearly for 3 months until now. >> Due to this war, the Yemen airport has been closed so her family hasn\'t come back to Yemen for nearly three months now.I\'m so sorry to hear her story. >> CORRECT!However, she told us that she keeps writing articles to spread Yemen\'s situations all over the world as a journalist. >> She told us that, as a journalist, she keeps on writing articles to let people all over the world know about Yemen\'s situation.