Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
It may be difficult for me to
understand your housing system is in Korea, [이름].
However, I have heard some stories about it
and from your explanation, I had a better understanding
about it. Thank you.^^
See you again on Monday!
~~Teacher Erine~~
Good morning, Teacher!
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Today, we talked about moving.
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I am going to explain about our housing types in Korea first.
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Many people prefer to have an apartment than villas and multiplex houses.
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Maybe, it would be not easy for you to understand about our house types easily.
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When it comes to apartments, it is the most popular housing type for everyone so the price has become naturally higher and higher.
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Because of this popularity, it is a dream for young generation to have an apartment when they settle down.
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In order to have it, most people have to get a loan and they need to repay it for a long time due to its high price.
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In this situation with no resident stability, a lot of people are suffering from looking for a suitable house.
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People who don’t have their own house usually move to a new house once every two years because many landlords tend to raise their rent.
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In this situation, if we can\'t afford to accept the higher price, we can\'t help but move to smaller or worse one.
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This situation indicates that no matter how hard we save our money, buying a house is a kind of long journey in our lives.
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Moreover, nowadays, the real estate market is like gambling so it is very difficult for us to judge if the price of house is reasonable.
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I am also one of the people who don’t participate in buying a house because of the crazy house prices.
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I don’t know how long I have to wait for our house price to become stable and reasonable but someday, I really want to be an owner of a spacious house.
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That is all for today and see you on Monday! ^^**
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