Composition

Hi, Kaylee!

I checked your e-mail below.

Please review my grammar corrections.

~Teacher Marie~

Hello, teacher.

>>CORRECT!
 It\'s a glorious Friday.

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 Tomorrow, I\'m going to National Zoo with my family.

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 My son is still young so he likes seeing animals in the flesh.

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 I\'ll tell you about visiting there later.

>>I\'ll tell you about my visit there later.
 Have a good weekend!
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Could you read and review my email below?
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Dear [Name]. [Name],
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I emailing you to ask something about after-school activity fee.

>>I\'m e-mailing you to ask you something about the after-school activity fee.
 My son, Junyoung(3EV) has taken Taekwondo class on Thursday and Friday since October 20.

>>My son, Junyoung (3EV), has been taking Taekwondo classes every Thursdays and Fridays since October 20.
 On October 26, 200RM was paid by the name of Taekwondo through P.O.S system.

>>On October 26, we paid 200 RM for his Taekwondo class through the P.O.S. system.
 Could you let me know the details about this payment?

>>Could you let me know the details of this payment?
 I heard that Membership fee, 50RM would be paid separately through P.O.S system and lesson fee is 30RM per lesson.

>>I heard that a membership fee of 50 RM should be paid separately through the P.O.S. system and it costs 30 RM per lesson.
 Is 200RM including Memership fee and 5 times lesson fees?

>>Does the 200 RM include the membership fee and the fee for 5 lessons?
 One more thing, I wonder if this payment would be paid once a month.
>>One more thing, I\'m wondering if we should pay the fee once a month.
If you are not a person in charge, please forward this request to the appropriate staff.

>>If you are not the person-in-charge, could you kindly forward this e-mail to the right person?