Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
[이름],
First of all, good luck with your performance!^^
I know that it may be hard for your fingers.
kkk
But with much passion and love, I know you can handle!
I will be explaining the other things about our customs tomorrow.
~~Teacher Erine~~
Good morning, Teacher!
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I am curious about your wedding custom.
>> Correct
Is it common for a bride to sing a song with playing the guitar in her wedding ceremony?
>> Is it common for a bride to sing a song while playing the guitar in her wedding ceremony?
Here in Korea, there are two opinions about this kind of event.
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Some people think of this event negatively.
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They said that a bride should behave modestly and be elegant.
>> Correct [I disagree!]
Moreover, a bridegroom is the only one who sings for a bride.
>> Moreover, the bridegroom is the only one who sings for a bride.
In contrast to this opinion, some people think of it as a fresh idea.
>> Correct
They said that a bride and a bridegroom are even with each other so brides also can sing a serenade for bridegrooms.
>> They said that the couple is married so brides can also sing a serenade for bridegrooms.
I don\'t know which one is correct but I will follow my own idea without caring what others think.
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Well, I think I really need to practice my event to the hardest. ^^;;
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See you tomorrow! ^^**
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