Composition

2016-10-31 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

학생이 쓴 원문

Good morning, Teacher! I am curious about your wedding custom. Is it common for a bride to sing a song with playing the guitar in her wedding ceremony? Here in Korea, there are two opinions about this kind of event. Some people think of this event negatively. They said that a bride should behave modestly and be elegant. Moreover, a bridegroom is the only one who sings for a bride. In contrast to this opinion, some people think of it as a fresh idea. They said that a bride and a bridegroom are even with each other so brides also can sing a serenade for bridegrooms. I don't know which one is correct but I will follow my own idea without caring what others think. Well, I think I really need to practice my event to the hardest. ^^;; See you tomorrow! ^^**

강사 첨삭

[이름],

First of all, good luck with your performance!^^

I know that it may be hard for your fingers.

kkk

But with much passion and love, I know you can handle!

I will be explaining the other things about our customs tomorrow.

~~Teacher Erine~~

Good morning, Teacher! 

>> Correct
 I am curious about your wedding custom. 

>> Correct
 Is it common for a bride to sing a song with playing the guitar in her wedding ceremony?

>>  Is it common for a bride to sing a song while playing the guitar in her wedding ceremony?
 Here in Korea, there are two opinions about this kind of event. 

>> Correct
 Some people think of this event negatively.

>> Correct
 They said that a bride should behave modestly and be elegant. 

>> Correct [I disagree!]
 Moreover, a bridegroom is the only one who sings for a bride.

>>  Moreover, the bridegroom is the only one who sings for a bride.
 In contrast to this opinion, some people think of it as a fresh idea. 

>> Correct
 They said that a bride and a bridegroom are even with each other so brides also can sing a serenade for bridegrooms. 

>>  They said that the couple is married so brides can also sing a serenade for bridegrooms. 
 I don\'t know which one is correct but I will follow my own idea without caring what others think.

>> Correct
 Well, I think I really need to practice my event to the hardest. ^^;;

>> Correct
 See you tomorrow! ^^**

>> Correct

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