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Hello, teacher. Today is Halloween Day. We have no culture to celebrate Halloween Day in Korea. But, here in Malaysia, Halloween is one of the most celebrating holidays. My son goes to American school so his school also celebrates Halloween Day. In fact, I was told that October 31 is a Halloween dress up day so I should prepare my son's Holloween costume for that day. Last week, I went to a party shop near my condo to buy a Halloween costume with my son. He chose a Dracula costume that looked like a red and black cape. I bought him this Dracula costume, and he was so excited to wear a Dracula costume. I also heard that this coming Friday is Deepavali, one of the Indian holidays. The school recommended to wear an Indian traditional costume that day if students have them. I like this diversity, which I cannot experince in Korea. I believe that this amazing experience could be wonderful resource for my son to live in a global society. Therefore, I love living in Malaysia now.

Hi there, Kaylee! It\'s good to know that you and your son are both receiving cultural enlightenment there in Malaysia. I\'m happy for you. Please check my corrections here. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, teacher. >> CORRECT!Today is Halloween Day. >> CORRECT!We have no culture to celebrate Halloween Day in Korea. >> We don\'t celebrate Halloween in Korea.But, here in Malaysia, Halloween is one of the most celebrating holidays. >> But here in Malaysia, Halloween is one of the most celebrated holidays.My son goes to American school so his school also celebrates Halloween Day. >> My son goes to an American school so his school also celebrates Halloween.In fact, I was told that October 31 is a Halloween dress up day so I should prepare my son\'s Holloween costume for that day. >> In fact, I was told that October 31 is a dress up day so I should prepare my son\'s Halloween costume for that day.Last week, I went to a party shop near my condo to buy a Halloween costume with my son. >> CORRECT!He chose a Dracula costume that looked like a red and black cape. >> He chose a Dracula costume with a red and black cape.I bought him this Dracula costume, and he was so excited to wear a Dracula costume. >> I bought the costume for him and he was so excited to wear it.I also heard that this coming Friday is Deepavali, one of the Indian holidays. >> CORRECT!The school recommended to wear an Indian traditional costume that day if students have them. >> The school recommended the students to wear their Indian traditional clothes, if they have one.I like this diversity, which I cannot experince in Korea. >> I like this diversity of holidays, which I cannot experience in Korea.I believe that this amazing experience could be wonderful resource for my son to live in a global society. >> I believe that this amazing experience could be a wonderful source of information for my son.Therefore, I love living in Malaysia now. >> CORRECT!