Composition

Freezing morning to you, [이름]!

I hate to greet you that way but you have to face

reality that you are experiencing cold weather there.

Just stay calm and warm. You should catch a cold

because it would be harder to recover from that

weather.

Take care!
~~Teacher Erine~~

Good morning, Teacher! 

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 Indeed, it is really cold here.

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 Originally, it is still not time to experience this awful cold weather at this time of year but suddenly, the cold weather is attacking us. 

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I have to get my duck-down jumper out tomorrow. 

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 By the way, when it comes to the public utility charges such as an electric and water bill, we have progressive taxes. 

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 The purpose of adding taxes is to make people conserve resources. 

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 Because of this policy, there was a time that people complained this rule to the government last summer.

>> Because of this policy, there was a time that people complained about this rule to the government last summer.
 I agree with progressive taxes on the public utility charges but I think it is bad for our government to only apply this policy to the public. 

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 It means that companies don\'t be affected by this rule so they just pay their bills based on the volume that they really used. 

>>  It means that companies aren\'t affected by this rule so they just pay their bills based on the volume that they really used. 
 This unfair situation has been tolerated for them in the name of boosting the management of companies so they use the public resources as much as they want without burdens of expenses.

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 In contrast to this situation, our ordinary people are always in fear about the bills so they can’t use them to the fullest even if the weather is extremely hot or cold. 

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 The cold weather is coming soon so I am worried how I could fight against this cold weather. 

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 At this moment of typing my composition, my hands are already freezing. 

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 Without the changing of the policy on the public utility charges, our ordinary people just have to make themselves to be stronger. 

>>  Without the changing of the policy on the public utility charges, our ordinary people just have to make themselves be stronger. 
 What a pity!!! ^^;;

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 That is all for today and see you tomorrow! ^^**

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