Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good evening, [이름]!
I\'m checking your composition here from my pad.
Regarding the pollution thing, Baguio City
is the most polluted cities in the Philippines, [이름].
Don\'t be surprised.
I\'ll explain this further to you tomorrow.
~~Teacher Erine~~
Good afternoon Teacher!
>> Correct
I got a message from Power English and they informed me that there is a vote that we are going to select the best costume.
>> I got a message from Power English and they informed me to vote for the best costume.
I am going to vote one of them objectively. ^^
>> Correct [You should!^^]
By the way, today, we talked about the night sky.
>> Correct
Unfortunately, I am only able to see satellites in the sky here in Seoul and I have no chance to see bright stars.
>> Correct [Really? Satellites?]
I sometimes can watch various skies in other countries on TV and there were a lot of bright and glittering stars as well shooting stars.
>> Correct
I have never seen those kinds of magnificent spectacles so I really hope that I would be able to see them closely in person.
>> Correct
I envy you who has unpolluted air. ^^;;
>> Correct
That is all for today and see you tomorrow! *^^*
>> Correct
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