Composition

Hello there, [이름]!
You always make me think about some things, you know?

I always have my realizations right after you submit

your composition.

But then again, sometimes I have an answer, too.

I think we always need to have balance in our lives.

It is something that we have to keep in mind.

~~Teacher Erine~~

Good morning, Teacher! 

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 Today, we talked about budget. 

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 Maybe, almost all people would spend and earn money with their own budget. 

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 I can\'t deny that money is one of the most important things in my life so I am going to mange my financial plan without regrets.

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 I have a lot of concerns for my future. 

>> I have a lot of concerns about my future.
 As we get old, there are a lot of issues that we are going to spend more money. 

>> As we get old, there are a lot of issues that we have to spend money on.
 At the same time, it is a reality that we lose a chance to raise a sum of money. 

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 What if we get sick and can\'t work someday? 

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 This situation will be directly connected to the quality of our old age.

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 In this situation, what we can lean on is money. 

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 That is why I am always in a dilemma. 

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 Should I enjoy my youth to the fullest without worries about money? 

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 Should I tighten my belt to prepare for my perfect old age?

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 Well, I think there is no right answer in our lives.

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 That is all for today and see you tomorrow! ^^**

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