Composition

2016-11-04 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

학생이 쓴 원문

Good morning, Teacher! I am going to make sentences in relation to expressions in our text book. 1. Look into -I bought new mobile phone so I have to look into its manual to understand about its function. -The prosecution must look into this affair exhaustively otherwise, people would think that they are deceived by the government. 2. Keep track -These days, I am keeping track news about the President Park Geunhye and Choi Sunsil gate affair. -We will keep track of this affair to the end. 3. Lose track -I totally lost track of time in the office because of my busyness. -I am trying not to lose track of my daily pattern after coming back from my trip. Have a wonderful weekend and see you on Monday! ^^

강사 첨삭

Happy Friday, [이름]!
Thank you for answering the questions in advance.

I am so grateful I have a very diligent student like you.

You have influenced me to be one today!

Hehe

See you on Monday!
~~Teacher Erine~~

Good morning, Teacher! 

>> Correct
 I am going to make sentences in relation to expressions in our text book. 

>> Correct
 1. Look into
-I bought new mobile phone so I have to look into its manual to understand about its function. 

>> I bought a new mobile phone so I have to look into its manual to understand its function. 
 -The prosecution must look into this affair exhaustively otherwise, people would think that they are deceived by the government.
>> Correct
2. Keep track
-These days, I am keeping track news about the President Park Geunhye and Choi Sunsil gate affair. 

>> These days, I am keeping track of the news about the President Park Geunhye and Choi Sunsil gate affair. 
 -We will keep track of this affair to the end.
>> Correct
3. Lose track
-I totally lost track of time in the office because of my busyness.

>> Correct
 -I am trying not to lose track of my daily pattern after coming back from my trip. 

>> Correct
 Have a wonderful weekend and see you on Monday! ^^

>> Correct

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