Composition

Hello, [이름]!
I am with you with this rally.

Although our country is facing different issues, I would highly participate

in this kind of event if I were there.

I couldn\'t also tolerate this kind of issue if it happens.

See you then!
~~Teacher Erine~~

Good morning,Teacher!
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Last Saturday, a rally was held in Gwanghuwmun and it was to exhort the President Park to step down. 

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 I also took part in the rally with my boyfriend and shouted her resignation out. 

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 All people who were there marched through the fixed route in arrangement. 

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 Approximately 200,000 people participated in the rally and it was the biggest scale of all time. 

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 We are living in a democratic republic so we can\'t sit and watch this ridiculous affair any more. 

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 Whenever I consider the fact that a shaman has controlled our country, I feel ashamed.

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 The ruling party also has to take responsibility for this because they acted on the sidelines on this issue.

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 No matter what, I am so sad and bitter that I am living in this country that political corruption spreads. 

>>  No matter what, I am so sad and bitter that I am living in this country where political corruption spreads. 
 Fortunately, we saw a hope that the old generation won\'t blindly support \'Candidate No 1\' any further thru this issue. 

>>  Fortunately, we saw hope that the old generation won\'t blindly support \'Candidate No 1\' any further thru this issue. 
 That is all for today and see you tomorrow! ^^

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