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2011-07-04 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Dear [Name], Good morning! I have some questions about MR90. We received the information that we have some inferiority item and we progress procedure of QM notification and debit note with Mr. [Name]. Finally, Debit note was Created , but we couln't print. Print veiw is as seen below. Would you please give a some solution?? Thank you for your help.

강사 첨삭

Hello Dear!

I hope you had a great weekend! I will see you in class.

 

Here are the corrections to your composition:

 

Dear [Name],
>>Correct!
Good morning!
>>Correct!
I have some questions about MR90.
>>I have a question about the MR90.
We received the information that we have some inferiority item and we progress procedure of QM notification and debit note with Mr. [Name].

>>We received an information about an inferiority item and we progressed the procedure of the QM notification and debit note to Mr. [Name].
Finally, Debit note was Created , but we couln't print.

>>When the debit note was done, we couldn't print it.
Print veiw is as seen below.

>>It says, print preview is as seen below.

Would you please give a some solution??

>>Would you please give me a solution for this?
Thank you for your help.

>>Correct!

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