Composition

Well, [이름],

I can say that this composition contains serious topics

that are better discussed in class. So, I will just say my opinions

about it when we have a chance to talk about it again.

Anyway, about my weight, kkk.. I just lost control!^^
~~Teacher Erine~~

Good afternoon, Teacher! 

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 We talked about relocating to another country today and I really have thought about this issue for many years. 

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 From a few years ago, there is a new term called \'three abandonment generation\' and it means that young people have abandoned \'romance, marriage and birth\' because of the poor economic situation. 

>>  From a few years ago, there has been a new term called \'three abandonment generation\' and it means that young people have abandoned \'romance, marriage and birth\' because of the poor economic situation. 
 I don\'t think that the poor economic situation will be changed into the good situation in a short period of time. 

>>  I don\'t think that the poor economic situation will be changed into a good situation in a short period of time. 
In order to make people change their mind to the positive side, our government should establish wise policy for young generation.

>> In order to make people change their mind to the positive side, our government should establish wise policies for young generation.
 Otherwise, like a domino effect, we won\'t be able to have a bright future.

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 I hope that our younger generation could live in an affluent society. 

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 That is all for today and see you tomorrow! ^^**

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 P.S.: You look really thin in the video that you gave me this morning.

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 What have happened to you!? ^*^~~~~~

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