Composition

Hello, [이름].

Thank you for sharing this idea with me.

I really hope that the government will do something

about it.

See you tomorrow.

~~Teacher Erine~~

Good morning, Teacher!

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 Today, we talked about buying a house. 

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 I really want to buy my own house but the price of house is extremely high to young generation. 

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 Moreover, the price is not reasonable and it is all a bubble, the biggest of all time.

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 However, our government has never established any good policies but they have rather kept the high price of house. 

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 The reason why the current government has done it like this is because they want to maintain getting votes from conservative people to stay in power.

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Generally, old generation owned a house and the house is the biggest asset for them. 

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 If the current government tried to lower the price of house, I am sure that the ruling party could not hold power any more.

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 However, the price of house won\'t stay in a high level in a few years any further because of the housing market mechanism. 

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The birth rate is getting lower and it causes a decrease in population.

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 It means that there would be no enough people who can buy a house in the future.

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 Moreover, old generation has become losing their job as they get old so they can\'t help but sell their house to the market to prepare for their living expenses of old age. 

>>  Moreover, old generation has been losing their jobs as they get old so they can\'t help but sell their house to the market to prepare for their living expenses during their old age. 
 In the end, houses would be overflowed in the market and in accordance with the imbalance of demand and supply, the price of house would be getting lower and lower. 

>>  In the end, houses would overflow in the market and in accordance with the imbalance of demand and supply, the price of house would be getting lower and lower. 
 The days when people were able to earn money from houses is already over. 

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 I hope that our government would remove this potential bomb for the bright future in Korea. 

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 That is all for today and see you tomorrow! ^^

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