Composition

Hello, teacher. It's been a long time. I've been busy doing this and that. Above all, I should say that I made a few friends here. One of them is my classmate of English conversation class. The rest of them are all my son's friends' moms. Of course, they are all Koreans. Except for my class mate, we met in the Korean community of my son's school. The school regularly holds a meeting for various nationalities of parents. Soon after I came to Malaysia, there was a coffee morning for Korean parents. That coffee morning was a good chance to make friends. Fortunately, some of them live near my condo. They thankfully suggested first giving me a ride home. Moreover, they told me that they can give a ride if I have to go to my son's school. You know. I don't have my own car and I cannot drive. So, their suggestion made me happy. Actually, I went grocery shopping with one of them yesterday. She let me know lots of information about life in Malaysia.

Hi there, Kaylee! I\'m delighted to hear that you are making lots of friends there. It seems like you are adjusting well. Thanks for dropping by. Check my corrections below. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, teacher. >> CORRECT!It\'s been a long time. >> CORRECT!I\'ve been busy doing this and that. >> CORRECT!Above all, I should say that I made a few friends here. >> First of all, I should say that I made a few friends here.One of them is my classmate of English conversation class. >> One of them is my classmate in the English conversation class.The rest of them are all my son\'s friends\' moms. >> CORRECT!Of course, they are all Koreans. >> CORRECT!Except for my class mate, we met in the Korean community of my son\'s school. >> Except for my classmate, we all met in the Korean community of my son\'s school.The school regularly holds a meeting for various nationalities of parents. >> The school regularly holds a meeting for parents with various nationalities. Soon after I came to Malaysia, there was a coffee morning for Korean parents. >> Soon after I came to Malaysia, there was a \"coffee morning\" event for Korean parents.That coffee morning was a good chance to make friends. >> That was a good chance for me to make friends.Fortunately, some of them live near my condo. >> CORRECT!They thankfully suggested first giving me a ride home. >> Luckily, they suggested giving me a ride home first.Moreover, they told me that they can give a ride if I have to go to my son\'s school. >> Moreover, they offered to give me a ride if I have to go to my son\'s school.You know. I don\'t have my own car and I cannot drive. >> You already know that I don\'t have my own car and I cannot drive.So, their suggestion made me happy. >> So their offer made my happy.Actually, I went grocery shopping with one of them yesterday. >> CORRECT!She let me know lots of information about life in Malaysia. >> She shared a lot of information about life in Malaysia.