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2016-11-11 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

학생이 쓴 원문

Good evening, Teacher! I'd like to submit my answer to the question in our book below. 1. Depending on how much money I have, I'll decide on which camera I'm going to buy. 2. Depending on your age, the ticket prices can be changed. 3. Depending on what you like, we'll book the restaurant. 4. Depending on the weather condition, we sometimes go for a picnic or just stay home during the weekend. I miss you~~~~^^

강사 첨삭

Thank you for sending your

answers in advance, [이름]!^^

I\'ll be having discussion with you later, ok?

I bet you have more stories to tell me!^^
~~Teacher Erine~~

Good evening, Teacher!
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I\'d like to submit my answer to the question in our book below.

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1. Depending on how much money I have, I\'ll decide on which camera I\'m going to buy.

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2. Depending on your age, the ticket prices can be changed.

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3. Depending on what you like, we\'ll book the restaurant.

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4. Depending on the weather condition, we sometimes go for a picnic or just stay home during the weekend.

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I miss you~~~~^^

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