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2016-11-13 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

학생이 쓴 원문

Good evening, Teacher! It is happy Friday! Our boss was back from his business trip today so I was busy in the office. By the way, I apologize for bothering you this morning. ^^;; I really didn't notice that I was calling you, not Sound Test Service. I usually test my headphone function with calling that before our class and it is my habit. I won't do this mistake any more from now on.^^ Have a wonderful weekend and see you on Monday! *^^*

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]!
About the mistake, it was fine with me.

Before answering your call, I was a bit worried

because I thought that you were in trouble or

in an urgent situation that time. kkk

See you tomorrow~

~~Teacher Erine~~

Good evening, Teacher!

>> Correct
 It is happy Friday!

>> Correct
 Our boss was back from his business trip today so I was busy in the office. 

>> Correct
 By the way, I apologize for bothering you this morning. ^^;;

>> Correct
 I really didn\'t notice that I was calling you, not Sound Test Service. 

>> Correct 
I usually test my headphone function with calling that before our class and it is my habit. 

>> I usually test my headphone\'s function by calling that before our class and it is my habit. 
 I won\'t do this mistake any more from now on.^^

>> Correct 
 Have a wonderful weekend and see you on Monday! *^^*

>> Correct 

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