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2016-11-14 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

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Good morning, Teacher! I am going to share what I did last weekend. My wedding is coming soon so there are a lot of things that are arranged in advance. I am going to Australia for two weeks and unlike other couples who prefer to have a package tour, I am going there as free traveling. In this case, I need to fix my journey one by one such as accommodation, a car and domestic flights by myself. I know that the earlier I book hotels, the cheaper the price would be so I have already finished booking hotels that I will stay. Apart from them, I took out a overseas insurance and checked how to get to the hostel on the first day of my travel. It was my first time to talk to an Australian on the phone last Saturday and I felt awkward about the situation that I was talking with the Australian. ^^:; However, I somehow felt happy that I was able to understand what she said. My preparation seems like going well but my skill of playing guitar is still not enough. It is the big problem that I face now. ^^;; I will share more tomorrow! See you! *^^*

강사 첨삭

Good morning, [이름]!
Hey, do you want me to teach you guitar skills, too?
Kkk

I am not an expert but I know I have longer experiences than

you do.^^

Let\'s talk more about this tomorrow.

See you!
~~Teacher Erine~~

Good morning, Teacher!

>> Correct
 I am going to share what I did last weekend.

>> Correct
 My wedding is coming soon so there are a lot of things that are arranged in advance.

>> Correct
 I am going to Australia for two weeks and unlike other couples who prefer to have a package tour, I am going there as free traveling. 

>> Correct 
In this case, I need to fix my journey one by one such as accommodation, a car and domestic flights by myself.

>> Correct 
 I know that the earlier I book hotels, the cheaper the price would be so I have already finished booking hotels that I will stay. 

>> Correct 
 Apart from them, I took out a overseas insurance and checked how to get to the hostel on the first day of my travel. 

>>  Apart from them, I took out an overseas insurance and checked how to get to the hostel on the first day of my travel. 
 It was my first time to talk to an Australian on the phone last Saturday and I felt awkward about the situation that I was talking with the Australian. ^^:;

>>  It was my first time to talk to an Australian on the phone last Saturday and I felt awkward about that situation.^^:;
 However, I somehow felt happy that I was able to understand what she said.

>> Correct 
 My preparation seems like going well but my skill of playing guitar is still not enough. 

>> Correct 
 It is the big problem that I face now. ^^;;

>> Correct 
 I will share more tomorrow! 

>> Correct 
 See you! *^^*

>> Correct 

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