Composition

Hello, teacher. It is fall here in Malaysia. These days, I can stay at home without an air-conditioners. I'm wondering if you have the similar weather condition there. Today, I will tell you about my experience in a hair salon. There are a lot of Korean hair salon near my condo. When I went there first, I was surprised because there were so many non-Korean customers than I expected. I was told that the K-pop is very popular here, and that's why many foreigners including Malaysians visit Korean hair salons. Anyway, I'm glad that I can get my hair Korean style permed. Yesterday, I visited one of the hair salon near my condo. The main hair dresser was a Korean, and the rest staff were all Malaysians. I decided to get my hair straight. My hair is originally naturally curly. While a staff washed my hair, water got into my back and ears. I was so flustered that I didn't know how to say. I never expected that water would get into my back and ears. kkk

Hello, Kaylee! I reviewed your composition below. Check my corrections. ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, teacher. >> CORRECT!It is fall here in Malaysia. >> CORRECT!These days, I can stay at home without an air-conditioners. >> These days, I can stay at home without turning on the air-conditioner.I\'m wondering if you have the similar weather condition there.>> CORRECT!Today, I will tell you about my experience in a hair salon. >> CORRECT!There are a lot of Korean hair salon near my condo. >> CORRECT!When I went there first, I was surprised because there were so many non-Korean customers than I expected. >> When I went there for the first time, I was surprised because there were more non-Korean customers than I expected.I was told that the K-pop is very popular here, and that\'s why many foreigners including Malaysians visit Korean hair salons. >> I was told that K-pop is very popular here that\'s why many foreigners, including Malaysians, visit Korean hair salons.Anyway, I\'m glad that I can get my hair Korean style permed. >> Anyway, I\'m glad that I can get my hair permed, Korean-style .Yesterday, I visited one of the hair salon near my condo. >> Yesterday, I visited one of the hair salons near my condo.The main hair dresser was a Korean, and the rest staff were all Malaysians. >> The main hair dresser was a Korean, and the rest of the staff were all Malaysians.I decided to get my hair straight. >> I decided to get my hair straightened.My hair is originally naturally curly. >> My hair is naturally curly.While a staff washed my hair, water got into my back and my ears. >> CORRECT!I was so flustered that I didn\'t know how to say. >> I was so flustered that I didn\'t know what to say.I never expected that water would get into my back and my ears. kkk >> CORRECT!