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Good morning, Teacher! We talked about pensions during our class. I am a person who is very worried about my future life so I tend to put importance on economic stability. Here in Korea, we have a national pension and its characteristic is based on publicness. Our government has actively promoted that people can get a pension when they get old in accordance with the inflation rate in the future. However, because of the reckless management, the reserve fund will be likely to be depleted in a few years. It means that even if my generation is forced to pay for the pension with a high price to the country, there would be a big possibility for us to lose a chance to get a pension from our country. It is the worst scenario but we should not exclude the possibility of ridiculous situation happening. That is why many people prepare for their personal pensions on their own. I hope that we can breathe easily and enjoy youth without worries about our future. See you tomorrow! *^^*

Hello, [이름]. Thank you for explaining things further. I have learned more about your culture. See you again tomorrow!~~Teacher Erine~~ Good morning, Teacher! >> CorrectWe talked about pensions during our class. >> CorrectI am a person who is very worried about my future life so I tend to put importance on economic stability. >> CorrectHere in Korea, we have a national pension and its characteristic is based on publicness. >> CorrectOur government has actively promoted that people can get a pension when they get old in accordance with the inflation rate in the future. >> Correct However, because of the reckless management, the reserve fund will be likely to be depleted in a few years. >> CorrectIt means that even if my generation is forced to pay for the pension with a high price to the country, there would be a big possibility for us to lose a chance to get a pension from our country. >> CorrectIt is the worst scenario but we should not exclude the possibility of ridiculous situation happening. >> CorrectThat is why many people prepare for their personal pensions on their own. >> CorrectI hope that we can breathe easily and enjoy youth without worries about our future. >> CorrectSee you tomorrow! *^^* >> Correct