Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!
I think social obligations are also accompanied
by discipline. If a person is not disciplined enough,
the person wouldn\'t be aware of the common social
obligations we have.
See you then!
~~Teacher Erine~~
Good morning, Teacher!
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Today, we talked about social obligations depending on sex.
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Regardless of sex, we should feel responsible for the social obligations.
>> Regardless of sex, we should feel responsible for any social obligations.
For examples,
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It would be better not to use disposable cups when we drink a cup of coffee.
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If we find that a faucet is turned on in a public place, we should turn it off.
>> If we find a faucet turned on in a public place, we should turn it off.
We should participate in the 10th-day-no-driving system to get rid of a traffic jam.
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If there is a fire happening in somewhere, we should call 119.
>> If there is fire happening somewhere, we should call 119.
As being one of social members, those above are considered as basic social obligations but it is true that there are a lot of people who don\'t follow them just because of inconvenience.
>> As one of the social members, those things above are considered as basic social obligations but it is true that there are a lot of people who don\'t follow them just because of inconvenience.
In order to have a brighter future, it is not too much to say that we should emphasize a strong sense of community.
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That is all for today and see you tomorrow! ^^
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