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2016-11-17 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

학생이 쓴 원문

Good evening, Teacher! Before having our class tomorrow, I am going to preview in advance. *Ingredients Korean foods need a lot of ingredients. *Fear to I fear to speak in other foreigners. *Nevertheless I had tried to persuade him. Nevertheless, he didn't follow my advice. See you tomorrow! ^^

강사 첨삭

You are the most advance

student I have ever met, [이름]!^^
This is the proof!^^

See you then!
~~Teacher Erine~~

Good evening, Teacher!

>> Correct
 Before having our class tomorrow, I am going to preview in advance. 
>> Correct
*Ingredients
Korean foods need a lot of ingredients. 

>> Correct
 *Fear to
I fear to speak in other foreigners. 

>> Correct
 *Nevertheless
I had tried to persuade him.
Nevertheless, he didn\'t follow my advice. 

>> Correct
 See you tomorrow! ^^

>> Correct

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