Composition

Thank you for telling me this, [이름]!
I will try these things, too!
As you know, my skin is not good.

It\'s the most terrible thing that I have.

See you!
~~Teacher Erine~~

Good morning, Teacher!

>> Correct
 I saw a program that introduced one old men who has drunk citric acid for many years. 

>> I saw a program that introduced one old man who has drunk citric acid for many years. 
 The person started drinking it because of liver spots on his face. 

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 As a result, the skin of his face is becoming whiter and healthier. 

>>  As a result, the skin of his face became whiter and healthier. 
 After I watched it, I have also taken it for a month 3~5 times a day in order to get rid of my pimple. 

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 I think the effect that I have felt is good so I am going to take it every single day. 

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 Moreover, as I heard, vitamin D is also good for pimples so I haven\'t skipped taking it too.

>> Correct [Yes! This one is true!]
 I think keeping good condition of skin is a lifelong homework for all women.

>>  I think keeping a good skin condition is a lifelong homework for all women.

That is all for today and see you tomorrow! ^^**

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