Composition

Good day, [이름]!
I have heard about this unfortunate situations

however, I admire those women who can cope up with

it. I think, you will be one of those women that I

will admire in the future!^^
~~Teacher Erine~~

Good morning, Teacher!

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 As an extension of our class, our country is conservative about old customs.

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 Because of this social mood, somehow, women are disadvantageous after getting married. 

>>  Because of this social mood, somehow, it is disadvantageous for women after getting married. 
 I am also concerned about this part and it will happen from next year. 

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 However, I am not about to follow this old bad custom and I will manage all things fairly. 

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 I don\'t want to feel small just because I am a daughter in law. 

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 Our social mood is also being changed gradually and I think it is the right track. 

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 Well, I just hope that I could cope up with unpredictable situations wisely. 

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 See you on Monday! ^^**

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