Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름].
I understand your concern with regards to your idea.
You are thinking more of the convenience, right?
Thanks for sharing anyway!
See you tomorrow!
~~Teacher Erine~~
Good morning, Teacher!
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When it comes to cooking, I have done it since I started living alone in Seoul and it has almost been for 11 years.
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I used to cook when I was in Pusan but my role was just a helper.
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I can say that I am fond of cooking and I do it every day.
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However, after moving into this house, I am losing a chance to cook because a public market is a little bit far so it is accessible by a bicycle.
>> However, after moving into this house, I have been losing a chance to cook because a public market is a little bit far and is only accessible by a bicycle.
When I lived in the previous house, I could buy some ingredients in a public market whenever I need.
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Of course, there is a supermarket near my house but I don\'t like going there because of the high price and stale ingredients in comparison to things in a public market.
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If I move to a new house after a few years, I want to look for a house near a public market. Hehehe!
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That is all for toady and see you tomorrow! ^^**
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