Composition

Hello, teacher. I got a cold so I have a sore throat. I guess this was because I got rained on last week. As I told you before, it's the rainy season. It usually rains between 3 pm and 5 pm. And this is the time my son comes back home. According to the school safety policy, I have to wait for my son in front of my condo. The school bus monitor can allow students get off the bus only if their parents come to the designated place. So, I was waiting for my son in the heavy rain. Of course, I had a umbrella. But, it was too heavy to keep me out the rain. Fortunately, I brought some household medicines from Korea. I took it as I felt pain in my throat. After taking the medicines for two days, I felt getting better. I realized that good health care is of primary importance while living in a foreign country. As a foreigner, going to a clinic is not that easy for me although my husband's company pays for my family's medical fees. Anyway, being healthy is the key point for today.

Hello, Kaylee! Thanks for sending in your composition. Take good care of yourself. Check my corrections below. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, teacher. >> CORRECT!I got a cold so I have a sore throat. >> I caught a cold so I have a sore throat.I guess this was because I got rained on last week. >> I guess this was because I got soaked in the rain last week.As I told you before, it\'s the rainy season. >> CORRECT!It usually rains between 3 pm and 5 pm. >> CORRECT!And this is the time my son comes back home. >> And this is the time that my son comes back home from school.According to the school safety policy, I have to wait for my son in front of my condo.>> CORRECT! The school bus monitor can allow students get off the bus only if their parents come to the designated place.>> The school bus monitor will allow students to get off the bus only if their parents come to the designated place. So, I was waiting for my son in the heavy rain. >> CORRECT!Of course, I had a umbrella. >> Of course, I had an umbrella.But, it was too heavy to keep me out the rain. >> CORRECT!Fortunately, I brought some household medicines from Korea. >> CORRECT! I took it as I felt pain in my throat. >> I took some when I started feeling pain in my throat.After taking the medicines for two days, I felt getting better. >> After taking it for two days, I felt like I was getting better.I realized that good health care is of primary importance while living in a foreign country.>> I realized that maintaining good health is very important while living in a foreign country. As a foreigner, going to a clinic is not that easy for me although my husband\'s company pays for my family\'s medical fees.>> CORRECT! Anyway, being healthy is the key point for today. >> CORRECT!