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2016-11-22 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

학생이 쓴 원문

Good morning, Teacher! Today, we talked about taking a nap and I am very envious of your custom. Here in Korea, it is impossible for us to imagine that we can take a nap during working time in our work place. Maybe, our country would win the first prize when it comes to how long we work for a day. In the situation that we have to work overtime regularly, taking a nap is all just pie in the sky. All people already know that taking a short nap makes people's brains become very productive and would create a synergy effect but in our social mood, it would be an unrealizable dream. That is why I sleep very early. Hehehe! That is all for today and see you tomorrow! ^^**

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]!
Thank you for sharing these things to me.

Now, it is clear for me why you sleep so early.

It makes sense. Thank you for answering this question!

See you tomorrow!
~~Teacher Erine~~

Good morning, Teacher!

>> Correct
 Today, we talked about taking a nap and I am very envious of your custom. 

>> Correct
 Here in Korea, it is impossible for us to imagine that we can take a nap during working time in our work place. 

>> Correct
 Maybe, our country would win the first prize when it comes to how long we work for a day. 

>> Correct
 In the situation that we have to work overtime regularly, taking a nap is all just pie in the sky. 

>> Correct
 All people already know that taking a short nap makes people\'s brains become very productive and would create a synergy effect but in our social mood, it would be an unrealizable dream. 

>> All people already know that taking a short nap makes people\'s brains become very productive and would create a synergic effect but in our social mood, it would be an unrealizable dream. 
 That is why I sleep very early. Hehehe!

>> Correct
 That is all for today and see you tomorrow! ^^**

>> Correct

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