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Good morning my dear Bella Thank you for your composition today. Kindly check some of the corrections that i made. Have a nice day!
T.Camille
I'm waiting for SBTS data long time.
>> I'm waiting for the SBTS data for a long time.
I anficipate that everyting is done until today in the morning.
>> I anticipated that everything was done this morning.
First of all, we already received 80 USD from SBTS in 30 June .
>> First of all, we already received 80 USD from SBTS last June 30.
Please delete the data of your AP as seen below.
>> Correct.
Second of all, I received the check list of SBTS invoices and total amount is 322,415.45Euro.
>> Second of all, I received the checklist of SBTS invoices and the total amount was 322,415.45 Euro.
But check list of SBTS invoices excepted that invoices total amount is 132,262.65Euro with your uploading data in Bellin.
>> But the checklist of SBTS uploaded in Berlin was 132,262.65 Euro.
Please give me a copy of invoice 132,262.65Euro or delete 132,262.65Euro in Bellin.
>> Please give me a copy of invoice 132,262.65 Euro or delete 132,262.65 Euro in Bellin
We need data of "Goods In Transit".
>>We need the data of goods in Transit.
I'm looking forward for your reply.
>>Correct.
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