Composition

2016-11-22 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

학생이 쓴 원문

Good evening, Teacher! I am going to make some sentences below. I feel secure about my future. That will secure your child's future. We are unable to feel secure about this earthquake any more. It will assure my safety. As long as they can provide safety measures, they can establish a company. We can't be sure of the safety of the facilities. Please tell me in a safe manner. See you soon! ^^

강사 첨삭

Good evening also, [이름]!^^
Thank you for answering the exercises in advance.
No problems at all as expected.
See  you tomorrow!
~~Teacher Erine~~
Good evening, Teacher!
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I am going to make some sentences below.
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I feel secure about my future. 
>> Correct
That will secure your child\'s future. 
>> Correct
We are unable to feel secure about this earthquake any more.
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It will assure my safety.
>> Correct
As long as they can provide safety measures, they can establish a company. 
>> Correct
We can\'t be sure of the safety of the facilities. 
>> Correct
Please tell me in a safe manner. 
>> Correct
See you soon! ^^
>> Correct

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