Composition

Hello there, [이름]!
I can sense that you are really

annoyed by your leader.

You really related her situation with

our topic.

Thanks for sharing your thoughts, anyway!^^
~~Teacher Erine~~

Good morning, Teacher!

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 When it comes to a money issue, I think I really can\'t deny the importance in my life. 

>>  When it comes to money issue, I think I really can\'t deny its importance in my life. 
 It seems like I am somewhat seen as a materialistic person but I think there would be no one who can live without money. 

>>  I am somewhat seen as a materialistic person but I think there would be no one who can live without money. 
 However, even if money is very important in our lives, we shouldn\'t do dirty tricks to achieve a lot of money.

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 It is a risky idea and finally, it will make our lives destroyed. 

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 We can learn lessons from current issues about the President Park. 

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 Too much greed brought her a tragic destiny. 

>>  Too much greed brought her to a tragic destiny. 
That\'s what you get what you deserve. 

>> You get what you deserve.
That is all for today and see you tomorrow! ^^**

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