Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
You know that I trust you, [이름].
And your cooking skill is more veteran than mine
so maybe, on Monday, I will try it here in the office.
kkk..
Thank you for teaching me!^^
~~Teacher Erine~~
Good morning, Teacher!
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These days, our topic is about foods so it always tortures us.
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Indeed, foods are indispensable in our lives. Hehehe!
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When it comes to steamed eggs, normally, people use a gas stove to cook it in an earthen pot.
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If you have a good quality earthen pot, you don\'t need to consider getting scorched and stick to the bottom of the pot when you cook it in on a gas stove.
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However, if you don\'t have good one and you are going to seek a simple and quick way, using microwave oven is the best way in a short time.
>> However, if you don\'t have good one and you are going to seek a simple and quick way; using microwave oven is the best way in a short time.
First, beat two eggs in a bowl and add some water and salted shrimp.
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Stir them enough and put the bowl in a microwave oven for 3 minutes.
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Use spoon and stir them again after the microwave oven stops.
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Put the bowl in a microwave and wait again for 2 minutes.
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Use spoon and stir them again after the microwave oven stops.
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Finally, put some spring onion in the bowl and put the bowl in a microwave wave again for 1 minute.
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You can have a delicious food in 6 minutes.
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It looks very complicated but it would have a heavenly taste.
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You can just refer to my recipe.
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See you tomorrow! ^^**
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