Composition

2016-11-24 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

학생이 쓴 원문

Good morning, Teacher! These days, our topic is about foods so it always tortures us. Indeed, foods are indispensable in our lives. Hehehe! When it comes to steamed eggs, normally, people use a gas stove to cook it in an earthen pot. If you have a good quality earthen pot, you don't need to consider getting scorched and stick to the bottom of the pot when you cook it in on a gas stove. However, if you don't have good one and you are going to seek a simple and quick way, using microwave oven is the best way in a short time. First, beat two eggs in a bowl and add some water and salted shrimp. Stir them enough and put the bowl in a microwave oven for 3 minutes. Use spoon and stir them again after the microwave oven stops. Put the bowl in a microwave wave again for 2 minutes. Use spoon and stir them again after the microwave oven stops. Finally, put some spring onion in the bowl and put the bowl in a microwave wave again for 1 minute. You can have a delicious food in 6 minutes. It looks very complicated but it would have a heavenly taste. You can just refer to my recipe. See you tomorrow! ^^**

강사 첨삭

You know that I trust you, [이름].

And your cooking skill is more veteran than mine

so maybe, on Monday, I will try it here in the office.

kkk..

Thank you for teaching me!^^
~~Teacher Erine~~

Good morning, Teacher!

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 These days, our topic is about foods so it always tortures us. 

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 Indeed, foods are indispensable in our lives. Hehehe! 

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 When it comes to steamed eggs, normally, people use a gas stove to cook it in an earthen pot.

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 If you have a good quality earthen pot, you don\'t need to consider getting scorched and stick to the bottom of the pot when you cook it in on a gas stove.

>> Correct
 However, if you don\'t have good one and you are going to seek a simple and quick way, using microwave oven is the best way in a short time.

>>  However, if you don\'t have good one and you are going to seek a simple and quick way; using microwave oven is the best way in a short time.
 First, beat two eggs in a bowl and add some water and salted shrimp. 

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 Stir them enough and put the bowl in a microwave oven for 3 minutes. 

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 Use spoon and stir them again after the microwave oven stops. 

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 Put the bowl in a microwave and wait again for 2 minutes. 

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 Use spoon and stir them again after the microwave oven stops.

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 Finally, put some spring onion in the bowl and put the bowl in a microwave wave again for 1 minute.

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 You can have a delicious food in 6 minutes. 

>> Correct 
It looks very complicated but it would have a heavenly taste. 

>> Correct
 You can just refer to my recipe. 

>> Correct
 See you tomorrow! ^^**

>> Correct

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