Composition

Hello, [이름]!
It\'s not only in your country where change is seen.

Here in country as well.

Thank you for sharing as well.

See you!
~~Teacher Erine~~

Good morning, Teacher! 

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 Here in Korea, we have two kinds of funerary customs. 

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 One is buried in a cemetery, the other one is that bones of the deceased are placed in a charnel house. 

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In the old days, people used to prefer to be buried in a cemetery. 

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 I think ancestors really put importance on worship the deceased in order to invoke a blessing for descendants.

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 However, these days, being placed in a charnel house is becoming widespread according to the changing of worship customs.

>>  However, these days, being placed in a charnel house is becoming widespread according to the changing of worshiping customs.
 I think this way is reasonable and practical. 

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 If I were dead, I would ask my family to scatter my ashes in the ocean and bury me in their hearts.

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 That is all for today and have a wonderful trip! ^^

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