Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
Good afternoon, Teacher!
After being back from my holiday, there are a lot of tasks that I have to deal with.
I am going to be crazy. ㅜㅜ
By the way, when it comes to wedding ceremony, I think your custom there seems like more precious than us.
A wedding is once in a life time event so we should consider this ceremony as a special event.
However, the more special the ceremony is, the more money we should pay.
In order for us to judge if the expense is reasonable in the wedding market, we need to investigate and compare.
Otherwise, there is a big possibility that we get ripped off in the blink of an eye.
That is all for today and see you tomorrow! ^^**
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
I am also shocked discussing about
the differences of our customs.
I think that makes us more interested in each others\'
stories. Let\'s have more of these stories next time.
~~Teacher Erine~~
Good afternoon, Teacher!
>> Correct
After being back from my holiday, there are a lot of tasks that I have to deal with.
After being back from my holiday, there are a lot of tasks that I have to deal with.
>> Correct
I am going to be crazy. ㅜㅜ
I am going to be crazy. ㅜㅜ
>> Correct
By the way, when it comes to wedding ceremony, I think your custom there seems like more precious than us.
By the way, when it comes to wedding ceremony, I think your custom there seems like more precious than us.
>> Correct
A wedding is once in a life time event so we should consider this ceremony as a special event.
A wedding is once in a life time event so we should consider this ceremony as a special event.
>> Correct
However, the more special the ceremony is, the more money we should pay.
However, the more special the ceremony is, the more money we should pay.
>> Correct
In order for us to judge if the expense is reasonable in the wedding market, we need to investigate and compare.
In order for us to judge if the expense is reasonable in the wedding market, we need to investigate and compare.
>> Correct
Otherwise, there is a big possibility that we get ripped off in the blink of an eye.
Otherwise, there is a big possibility that we get ripped off in the blink of an eye.
>> Correct
That is all for today and see you tomorrow! ^^**
That is all for today and see you tomorrow! ^^**
>> Correct
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