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2016-12-02 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

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Good morning, Teacher! When it comes to manners on the table, we have some etiquette below. We can't eat before seniors start eating. We should't put the spoon earlier than seniors. We should't leave the table first if someone is still eating. We can't talk and make noise of chewing sound during meals. Are you surprised with them? Hehehe~ See you on Monday! ^^**

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]~I\'m not really surprised by these because I have heard some of them. I will tell you  more examples of our manners on Monday!^^~~Teacher Erine~~ Good morning, Teacher! >> CorrectWhen it comes to manners on the table, we have some etiquette below.>> CorrectWe can\'t eat before seniors start eating. >> CorrectWe should\'t put the spoon earlier than seniors. >> Correct We should\'t leave the table first if someone is still eating. >> CorrectWe can\'t talk and make noise of chewing sound during meals. >> CorrectAre you surprised with them? Hehehe~ >> CorrectSee you on Monday! ^^** >> Correct

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