Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
Good morning,Teacher!
Yesterday, I attended a wedding and it was held in a hotel.
The bride and bride groom prepared a course meal so I had to stay there for one and half hours.
I guess the meal for a person seemed to cost approximately US$60~70 because it was held in a hotel.
However, the course meal's taste and quality was not that good.
The main menu, steak was not real beef but it was like a instant patty.
I think it was not reasonable.
Everything there was to make outward show so I was disappointed with the style.
I hope our wedding custom will be changed into a practical and simple style.
That is all for today and see you tomorrow! ^^**
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!Make youre wedding a simple yet unique.
Your performance will make a difference!^^
Don\'t forget to have a video taken, ok?
Take care!~~Teacher Erine~~
Good morning,Teacher!
>> CorrectYesterday, I attended a wedding and it was held in a hotel.
>> CorrectThe bride and bride groom prepared a course meal so I had to stay there for one and half hours.
>> CorrectI guess the meal for a person seemed to cost approximately US$60~70 because it was held in a hotel.
>> Correct However, the course meal\'s taste and quality was not that good.
>> CorrectThe main menu, steak was not real beef but it was like a instant patty.
>> The main menu was steak which was not real beef. It was like an instant patty. I think it was not reasonable.
>> CorrectEverything there was to make outward show so I was disappointed with the style.
>> CorrectI hope our wedding custom will be changed into a practical and simple style.
>> CorrectThat is all for today and see you tomorrow! ^^**
>> Correct
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