Composition

2016-12-06 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

학생이 쓴 원문

Good afternoon, Teacher! Regarding our today's topic, maybe, many people would want to have a wonderful house. Especially, for newlywed couples, decorating a new place is one of the most important things that they have to do before their wedding. I also have this dream but if the house that I am living is not mine, I wouldn't focus on decorating the place with paying a lot of expenses. As a tenant, I don't have the right to drive a nail into a wall so even if I am craving for decorating my place, I am not allowed to do anything. It's the greatest sorrow as one of tenants. ^^;; That is all for today and see you tomorrow! ^^

강사 첨삭

Good morning, [이름]!

I believe you will have your own house

in the future. Thank you for telling me about

your custom.

See you later in class!^^
~~Teacher Erine~~

Good afternoon, Teacher!

>> Correct
 Regarding our today\'s topic, maybe, many people would want to have a wonderful house. 

>> Regarding today\'s topic, maybe, many people would want to have a wonderful house.
 Especially, for newlywed couples, decorating a new place is one of the most important things that they have to do before their wedding. 

>> Correct
 I also have this dream but if the house that I am living is not mine, I wouldn\'t focus on decorating the place with paying a lot of expenses. 

>> Correct
 As a tenant, I don\'t have the right to drive a nail into a wall so even if I am craving for decorating my place, I am not allowed to do anything. 

>> Correct
 It\'s the greatest sorrow as one of tenants. ^^;;

>> Correct
 That is all for today and see you tomorrow! ^^

>> Correct

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