Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good morning, [이름]!
I believe you will have your own house
in the future. Thank you for telling me about
your custom.
See you later in class!^^
~~Teacher Erine~~
Good afternoon, Teacher!
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Regarding our today\'s topic, maybe, many people would want to have a wonderful house.
>> Regarding today\'s topic, maybe, many people would want to have a wonderful house.
Especially, for newlywed couples, decorating a new place is one of the most important things that they have to do before their wedding.
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I also have this dream but if the house that I am living is not mine, I wouldn\'t focus on decorating the place with paying a lot of expenses.
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As a tenant, I don\'t have the right to drive a nail into a wall so even if I am craving for decorating my place, I am not allowed to do anything.
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It\'s the greatest sorrow as one of tenants. ^^;;
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That is all for today and see you tomorrow! ^^
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