Composition

2016-12-06 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

학생이 쓴 원문

Good morning,Teacher! Regarding the word 'Whereas', I am still unfamiliar with it so I am going to make some sentences with the word. -People in the OECD countries work 1770 hours per year, whereas people in Korea work 2200 per year. -Taking this pill usually shows a positive effect on a lot of people, whereas for some people, it doesn't. -He looks forties, whereas she looks about fifties. That is all for today and see you tomorrow! ^^

강사 첨삭

[이름],

You may not be familiar with it, but I think you became

so because your sentences are perfect.^^
Thank you so much for sharing your sentences.

See you then!^^
~~Teacher Erine~~

Good morning,Teacher!

>> Correct
Regarding the word \'Whereas\', I am still unfamiliar with it so I am going to make some sentences with the word.

>> Correct
-People in the OECD countries work 1770 hours per year, whereas people in Korea work 2200 per year.

>> Correct
-Taking this pill usually shows a positive effect on a lot of people, whereas for some people, it doesn\'t.

>> Correct
-He looks forties, whereas she looks about fifties.

>> Correct
That is all for today and see you tomorrow! ^^

>> Correct

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