Composition

2016-12-07 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

학생이 쓴 원문

Good afternoon, Teacher! I am going to fill in blanks. 1.Whereas I'm allowed to use both the common and the private kitchens, Troy has access to only the common. 2. Whereas I was never good at high jumps, my brother exceeded and fell in that category. 3. Whereas winter in Calgary is very dry, the winter in Toronto is very humid. 4. Whereas skating can be an healthy exercise, it can never be good for kids. See you! ^^

강사 첨삭

Hello there, [이름]!^^
I need to ask you to discuss number

two to me.

See you then!^^
~~Teacher Erine~~

Good afternoon, Teacher!

>> Correct
I am going to fill in blanks.
>> Correct
1.Whereas I\'m allowed to use both the common and the private kitchens, Troy has access to only the common.

>> Correct
2. Whereas I was never good at high jumps, my brother exceeded and fell in that category.

>> I need to ask you with regards to this one.
3. Whereas winter in Calgary is very dry, the winter in Toronto is very humid.

>> Correct
4. Whereas skating can be an healthy exercise, it can never be good for kids.
>> Correct
See you! ^^

>> Correct

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