Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Kaylee!
It really has been a long time!
I\'m so glad to hear from you again.
I feel a bit bad for your son too.
But don\'t worry too much. He\'s still young. I\'m sure he can get over this.
You just need to help him and guide him.
Please check my corrections below.
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
Hello, teacher.
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It\'s been a long time.
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I have been good.
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It\'s been almost 2 months since I came to Malaysia.
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I have tried to adapt to a new life here in Malaysia.
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I think I have been achieving a soft landing.
>> I think I have been adjusting well.
*I\'m not sure what you mean by this. ^^
As for my son, he was happy with his new school life, at first.
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However, he started to get stressed about going to an international school after three weeks.
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He said, \"I am very tired and exhausted during my school time because I have to concentrate on others\' talking all day.
>> He said, \"I am exhausted at school because I have to concentrate on listening to others talk all day.
But, I still cannot understand them.
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So I\'m very sad.\"
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Several days ago, I visited his school to attend a field day.
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Then, I found that he was struggling to read his friends\' and teachers\' face and gestures.
>> That\'s when I found out that he was struggling to read his friends\' and teachers\' facial expressions and gestures.
As a mother, I feel sad that he is having a hard time.
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I understand that it is natural for him not to speak English very well now.
>> I understand that it is natural for him not to speak English very well right now.
Moreover, I know he needs some time in order to speak English to a certain degree.
>> Moreover, I know he needs some time in order to be able to speak English to a certain degree.
So, I will wait for him to get over this difficulty.
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I think that\'s what I can do for him.
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