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2016-12-18 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

학생이 쓴 원문

Dear Teacher! I have bad news to tell you. I am going to put my class on hold from tomorrow because I suddenly have to go to China on a business trip for 4 days and I will be back next Wednesday. We are not going to meet for quite some time. Take care of yourself and see you next year! I will send you some pictures of my wedding and honey moon.^^**

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!
I am still waiting for the pictures.
Congratulations!^^

Always take care of yourself!

~~Teacher Erine~~

Dear Teacher!

>> Correct
 I have bad news to tell you.

>> Correct
 I am going to put my class on hold from tomorrow because I suddenly have to go to China on a business trip for 4 days and I will be back next Wednesday.

>> Correct
 We are not going to meet for quite some time. 

>> Correct
 Take care of yourself and see you next year! 

>> Correct
 I will send you some pictures of my wedding and honey moon.^^**

>> Correct

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