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What is the happiness? I really want to know about this. To be honest with you, I think that I am not happy right now. I know I usually see my negative thing around me. This makes me unhappy. So I always try to see the positive things around me. But it is not easy to change my character. But I will not give it up. I am not young now and I am not old now. I can try to do something for a better life. So, I will do it again from now.

Hello [이름]! Happiness is found in things you really want for your life. Try having self reflection and ask yourself what you really want. It is not wrong to want something for yourself it gives you the satisfaction you need to live a full life. It is also not selfish to need something for yourself only that doesn't involve your family. In order to be happy you should do things you like for yourself first and if you are able to achieve your goal then that's the time you try to involve your family in your happiness. You are too sad. Think of something that will make you happy. - T.Faye -   Here are some of your corrections: What is the happiness? I really want to know about this. >>What is happiness? I really want to know something about this.To be honest with you, I think that I am not happy right now. >>Correct!I know I usually see my negative thing around me. >>I know that I see negative things around me. This makes me unhappy. >>Correct!So I always try to see the positive things around me. >>Correct! But it is not easy to change my character. >>Correct!But I will not give it up. >>Correct! I am not young now and I am not old now. >>I am not young or old now. I can try to do something for a better life. >>Correct!So, I will do it again from now. >>I will do it from now on.