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2011-07-14 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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I have some questions about Chartis Insurance. Please see the attached file. We received the invoice at July 4th. But I don't know what about for Insurance and when as from this insurance will come into effect? So please give me some detail of Chartis Insurance and please give me feedback. Thank you for your help.

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Hi Bella my dear, Wow almost all of your sentences are correct. I'm so proud of your ^---^ n Here are some of my corrections.  T. Cam ^_^   I have some questions about Chartis Insurance.>> CorrectPlease see the attached file. >> CorrectWe received the invoice at July 4th. >> CorrectBut I don't know what about for Insurance and when as from this insurance will come into effect?>> However, I know what the insurance is all about and when will it come into effect.So please give me some detail of Chartis Insurance and please give me feedback.>> SO please give me details about Chartis Insurance as a feedback to my request. Thank you for your help. >> Correct

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