Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there my dear Bella,
Good afternoon! Thank you for this composition. I have made some corrections for you please try to go over them. I hope it would help.
Dear [Name]. [Name],
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I have some questions about QM notification.
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I received the QM notification from Mr. [Name] woon ho at 11th July
>> I received the QM notification from Mr. [Name] Hoon the 11th of July.
Those meterials already return to BFH at 14th July and GR minus 3PC.
>> Those meterials were already returned to BFH on the 14th of July and GR minus 3PC.
I couln't issue the debit note as seen below.
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The warning message says "The task " denit vendor w. Return Delivery" is missing in the notification".
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So I requested to Mr. [Name] that give me task about "Denit vendor w. Return Delivery".
>> So I requested Mr. [Name] to give me a task about "Denit vendor w. Return Delivery".
He gave me an answer that their process is clear and he don't know how to solve it.
>>His answer was that their process is clear and he doesn뭪 know how to solve it.
So would you please give me a solution??
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I'm looking forward for your reply.
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Thank you for your help.
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