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2011-07-15 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Dear [Name]. [Name], I have some questions about QM notification. I received the QM notification from Mr. [Name] woon ho at 11th July Those meterials already return to BFH at 14th July and GR minus 3PC. I couln't issue the debit note as seen below. The warning message says "The task " denit vendor w. Return Delivery" is missing in the notification". So I requested to Mr. [Name] that give me task about "Denit vendor w. Return Delivery". He gave me an answer that their process is clear and he don't know how to solve it. So would you please give me a solution?? I'm looking forward for your reply. Thank you for your help.

강사 첨삭

Hello there my dear Bella,

     Good afternoon! Thank you for this composition. I have made some corrections for you please try to go over them. I hope it would help.

Dear [Name]. [Name],
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I have some questions about QM notification.
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I received the QM notification from Mr. [Name] woon ho at 11th July

>> I received the QM notification from Mr. [Name] Hoon the 11th of July.

Those meterials already return to BFH at 14th July and GR minus 3PC.

>> Those meterials were already returned to BFH on the 14th of July and GR minus 3PC.
I couln't issue the debit note as seen below.
>>Correct
The warning message says "The task " denit vendor w. Return Delivery" is missing in the notification".
>>Correct
So I requested to Mr. [Name] that give me task about "Denit vendor w. Return Delivery".

>> So I requested Mr. [Name] to give me a task about "Denit vendor w. Return Delivery".

He gave me an answer that their process is clear and he don't know how to solve it.
>>His answer was that their process is clear and he doesn뭪 know how to solve it.
So would you please give me a solution??
>>Correct
I'm looking forward for your reply.

>>Correct
Thank you for your help.

>>Correct

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