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2011-07-18 · 첨삭 강사 Connie

학생이 쓴 원문

Dear [Name]. [Name], ERO_P is still not working now. It wasn't any action the button after log in ERO_P. I already restarted my computer but it is still not working . I have to request ERO_P before next Monday. Please give me the solution. Thank you for your help.

강사 첨삭

Hi! You did a good job in writing this composition. I hope you'll find a solution soon. Have a great afternoon! T. Camille Dear [Name]. [Name],>>Correct OR>>Mr. [Name],ERO_P is still not working now.>> ERO_P is still not working until now.It wasn't any action the button after log in ERO_P.>>It did not perform any action after logging into ERO_P. I already restarted my computer but it is still not working .>>Correct OR>>I've already tried to restart my computer but it still isn't working.I have to request ERO_P before next Monday.>>Correct OR>>I have to apply for ERO_P before next Monday.Please give me the solution.>>Correct OR>>Please suggest some solutions.Thank you for your help. >>Correct OR>>I appreciate your help.

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