Composition

2017-02-13 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

학생이 쓴 원문

Good afternoon,Teacher! I'd like to submit some sentences for you to help me check. 1. Have the employees gone on strike yet? Yes, they have. 2. Has she taken a break yet? Yes, she has. She took a break a while ago. 3. Have you done your homework yet? No, I haven't. I had to take a sleep for a while because of my tiredness. 4. Have you and she finished eating breakfast? No, we haven't. We had lots of conversation to make to each other. 5. Have you fed your cat yet? No, I haven't. I didn't have enough cat foods. See you later! ^^

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!


There\'s not much to correct here. ^^

Most of the sentences were perfect!

Great job!

See you later my dear!


_Teacher Dianne ^^


Good afternoon,Teacher!

>> Good afternoon, teacher!
 I\'d like to submit some sentences for you to help me check. 

>> Correct

>> Or:  I\'d like to send some sentences for you to help me check them. 


 1. Have the employees gone on strike yet?

>> Correct
   Yes, they have. 

>> Correct
 2. Has she taken a break yet?

>> Correct
   Yes, she has. She took a break a while ago. 

>> Correct
 3. Have you done your homework yet?

>> Correct
   No, I haven\'t. I had to take a sleep for a while because of my tiredness. 

>> Correct

>> Or: No, I haven\'t. I had to take some sleep for a while because of tiresome. 
 4. Have you and she finished eating breakfast? 

>> Correct
   No, we haven\'t. We had lots of conversation to make to each other. 

>> No, we haven\'t. We had lots of conversations to make to each other. 
 5. Have you fed your cat yet?

>> Correct
   No, I haven\'t. I didn\'t have enough cat foods. 

>> Correct
 See you later! ^^

>> Correct

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