Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
It was really nice speaking with you.
I had fun listening to the things you\'ve shared about you especially your work.
Great job with your listening, comprehension, and speaking skills. ^_^
See you tomorrow!
_Teacher Dianne ^^
Hi, Teacher!
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Nice to talk to you! ^^
>> It was nice to talk to you! ^^
>> Or: It was nice talking to you! ^^ (It was nice talking to you too! ^^)
I was a little bit nervous, but you made me feel comfortable during our class.
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I wrote down some sentences listening to the MP3 file so that I can enhance my English skill.
>> I wrote down some sentences while listening to the MP3 file so that I can enhance my English skill.
*Speaking part
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I am working in a trading company.
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At this time of the year, it is so cold to climb a mountain.
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I have dated with him for 5 years.
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May I ask if you are married?
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If someone who doesn\'t pass his or her birthday,~~~~
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My birthday didn\'t pass at this moment.
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There are two more years in comparison to the international age.
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My tasks are repeated every day.
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*Listening part
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I do agree with you.
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You settle down and start a family.
>> You settled down and started a family.
I am turning 32 years this year.
>> I am turning 32 years old this year.
When your mother was conceiving you, you were already one year old.
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When you are still in the womb of your mother, you count one year already.
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That is how you do it.
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You have a unique culture in Korea.
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It is understandable.
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I have met someone like you first.
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That is all for today and see you tomorrow! ^^
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