Composition

2017-02-13 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi, Teacher! Nice to talk to you! ^^ I was a little bit nervous but you made me feel comfortable during our class. I wrote down some sentences listening to the MP3 file so that I can enhance my English skill. *Speaking part I am working in a trading company. At this time of the year, it is so cold to climb a mountain. I have dated with him for 5 years. May I ask if you are married? If someone who doesn't pass his or her birthday,~~~~ My birthday didn't pass at this moment. There are two more years in comparison to the international age. My tasks are repeated every day. *Listening part I do agree with you. You settle down and start a family. I am turning 32 years this year. When your mother was conceiving you, you were already one year old. When you are still in the womb of your mother, you count one year already. That is how you do it. You have a unique culture in Korea. It is understandable. I have met someone like you first. That is all for today and see you tomorrow! ^^

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!


It was really nice speaking with you.

I had fun listening to the things you\'ve shared about you especially your work.

Great job with your listening, comprehension, and speaking skills. ^_^

See you tomorrow!


_Teacher Dianne ^^


Hi, Teacher!

>> correct


 Nice to talk to you! ^^

>> It was nice to talk to you! ^^

>> Or: It was nice talking to you! ^^ (It was nice talking to you too! ^^)


 I was a little bit nervous, but you made me feel comfortable during our class. 

>> correct
 I wrote down some sentences listening to the MP3 file so that I can enhance my English skill. 

>>  I wrote down some sentences while listening to the MP3 file so that I can enhance my English skill. 


 *Speaking part

>> correct
 I am working in a trading company. 

>> correct
 At this time of the year, it is so cold to climb a mountain. 

>> correct
 I have dated with him for 5 years. 

>> correct
 May I ask if you are married? 

>> correct
 If someone who doesn\'t pass his or her birthday,~~~~ 

>> correct
 My birthday didn\'t pass at this moment. 

>> correct
 There are two more years in comparison to the international age. 

>> correct
 My tasks are repeated every day. 

>> correct


 *Listening part

>> correct
 I do agree with you. 

>> correct
 You settle down and start a family. 

>> You settled down and started a family.
 I am turning 32 years this year. 

>>  I am turning 32 years old this year. 
 When your mother was conceiving you, you were already one year old. 

>> correct
 When you are still in the womb of your mother, you count one year already. 

>> correct
 That is how you do it. 

>> correct
 You have a unique culture in Korea.

>> correct
 It is understandable. 

>> correct
 I have met someone like you first.
>> correct
That is all for today and see you tomorrow! ^^

>> correct

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