Composition

2017-02-14 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

학생이 쓴 원문

Good afternoon, teacher! Is your cold getting better? I hope I can hear your real voice. ^^;; Today, we are going to meet again and I'd like to suggest a subject of conversation to you. How about 'Family'? See you soon! ^^

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!


Thank you for the concern my dear!

Hopefully, my voice will go back to normal.

It\'s annoying me already. ^_^

See you later!


_Teacher Dianne ^^


Good afternoon, teacher!

>> Correct
 Is your cold getting better? 

>> Correct
 I hope I can hear your real voice. ^^;;

>> Correct
 Today, we are going to meet again and I\'d like to suggest a subject of conversation to you. 

>> Today, we are going to meet again and I\'d like to suggest a subject or a topic of our conversation to you. 
 How about \'Family\'?

>> Correct
 See you soon! ^^

>> Correct

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