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Hi, [이름]!

Thank you for sending me this composition.

Well, you have great skills especially in speaking and listening.

Keep it up!

I\'ll see you tomorrow with your proposed topic. ^^

_Teacher Dianne ^^

Good evening, teacher!

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 Today, I\'d like to write down some sentences that I listened to and said during our class.

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 *You proposed a topic for today which is about family. 

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 *That is how you started your journey in Seoul. 

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 *Can you describe your childhood life with your family? 

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>> Or:  an you describe your childhood days with your family members?
 *I don\'t know if my experience was worse than yours.

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 *It is not the right mood for a girl. 

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>> Or: It is not the right thing to do for a girl.
 *How close are you with your family members?

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 *When was the last time you have seen you family members?

>>  When was the last time you have seen your family members?
 *You have a valid reason not to go there. 

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 *You took her worries and responsibilities. 

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>> Or: You took over all her responsibilities.
 *Even on that day, I didn\'t go to Busan. 

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 *She works on the night shift. 

>> She works at a night shift. 

>> Or: She works at night.

>> Or: She is working at night.

>> Or: Her shift is at night. 

 I\'d like to propose a topic for tomorrow below. 

>>  I\'d like to propose a topic for tomorrow and the topic is below. 
 Let\'s share our daily schedule! 

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 That is all for today and take care! ^^

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