Composition

2017-02-15 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

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Good afternoon, teacher! Could you help me check some sentences which are related to participial phrase? I am hungry wanting to eat pizza and coke. I am sorry forgetting the appointment. I write it using a dictionary. I saw his fortune using a paper ball. It is hot boiled a minute ago. I am in a good mood finishing my job safely. It is okay staying here. You are right choosing the 2nd one. It is up to you selling it. See you later! ^^

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!


Participial phrase commonly functions as an adjective.

Thank you for sharing these sentences.

I hope I helped you in a way. ^^

See you later!


_Teacher Dianne ^^


Good afternoon, teacher!

>> correct
 Could you help me check some sentences which are related to participial phrase?
>> correct
I am hungry wanting to eat pizza and coke. 

>> I am hungry, wanting to eat pizza and coke. 
 I am sorry forgetting the appointment. 

>> correct

>>  Or: I am sorry for forgetting the appointment. 
 I write it using a dictionary. 

 >> I wrote it using a dictionary. 
 I saw his fortune using a paper ball. 

>> correct

>> Or: I saw his fortune using a magic ball.
 It is hot boiled a minute ago. 

>>  It was hot boiled a minute ago.
 I am in a good mood finishing my job safely. 

>> correct
 It is okay staying here. 

>> correct
 You are right choosing the 2nd one. 

>> correct
 It is up to you selling it.
>> correct
See you later! ^^

>> correct

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