Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Yes, you\'re right.
You\'re going to know more about me as we go along with our future conversations.
I will share more.
I also want to know you better. ^^
Especially the activities that you do when you\'re out of the office or work . ^^
See you later my dear.
_Teacher Dianne ^_^
Good afternoon, teacher!
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Yesterday, we talked about our daily schedule and I somehow feel bored when it comes to my routine.
>> Yesterday, we talked about our daily schedule and I somehow felt bored when it comes to my routine.
Maybe, all people would feel the same with the way of my thinking.
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>> Or: Maybe, all people would think the same with the way I think.
However, I appreciate my typical life without hardship and I wish I could keep on this pattern longer.
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I just felt that it was a shame that I couldn\'t hear more about your routine.
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I believe that I have a chance to know about you thru our conversation in the future.
>> I believe that I will have a chance to know about you more thru our conversations in the future.
Finally, the topic that I want to propose for today is \'Let\'s talk about our personality!\' ^^
>> Finally, the topic that I want to propose for today is \'Let\'s talk about our personality!\' ^^
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See you soon!
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