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2017-02-16 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

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Good afternoon, teacher! Yesterday, we talked about our daily schedule and I somehow feel bored when it comes to my routine. Maybe, all people would feel the same with the way of my thinking. However, I appreciate my typical life without hardship and I wish I could keep on this pattern longer. I just felt that it was a shame that I couldn't hear more about your routine. I believe that I have a chance to know about you thru our conversation in the future. Finally, the topic that I want to propose for today is 'Let's talk about our personality!' ^^ See you soon!

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!


Yes, you\'re right.

You\'re going to know more about me as we go along with our future conversations.

I will share more.

I also want to know you better. ^^

Especially the activities that you do when you\'re out of the office or work . ^^

See you later my dear.


_Teacher Dianne ^_^


Good afternoon, teacher!

>> correct
 Yesterday, we talked about our daily schedule and I somehow feel bored when it comes to my routine.

>>  Yesterday, we talked about our daily schedule and I somehow felt bored when it comes to my routine.  
Maybe, all people would feel the same with the way of my thinking. 

>> correct

>> Or: Maybe, all people would think the same with the way I think.
 However, I appreciate my typical life without hardship and I wish I could keep on this pattern longer. 

>> correct
 I just felt that it was a shame that I couldn\'t hear more about your routine. 

>> correct
 I believe that I have a chance to know about you thru our conversation in the future. 

>> I believe that I will have a chance to know about you more thru our conversations in the future. 
Finally, the topic that I want to propose for today is \'Let\'s talk about our personality!\' ^^

>> Finally, the topic that I want to propose for today is \'Let\'s talk about our personality!\' ^^

>> correct
 See you soon!

>> correct

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