Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Indeed, personality is an interesting topic and I think people can share a lot about it.
Let\'s talk more about this topic later.
I want to know more about your personality. ^^
See you later!
_Teacher Dianne ^_^
Good afternoon, teacher!
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Happy Friday to you!
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It was interesting to talk about our personality yesterday.
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I want to talk more about it today evening. ^^
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>> Or: I want to talk more about it this evening.
I think a specific environment that we have exposed to during our lives is the biggest factor in forming our personalty.
>> I think a specific environment that we have been exposed to during our lives is the biggest factor in forming our personality.
>> Or: I think a specific environment that we have been exposed to during our lives is the biggest factor in molding our personality.
Let\'s talk more about it this evening!
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See you later! ^^**
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